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main characters: Pein, Kazuzu, Konan, Hidan and other Akatsuki members

I thought it would be weird for investigators to not have a last name, so I gave them some :XD:

Yuudai means hero, manly lol

:iconleaderplz: :iconsaysplz: yay! I`m a manly hero :iconhappyorangeplz:

initially I wanted to give Kakuzu the name Natsucki just for the lulz, which mens vegetables, greens :XD: but I thought over it and settled for Tomiko, which means wealth, abundance and it describes his obsession with money perfectly...I think

hope you like this chapter as well :D

reviews would be nice :heart:




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Yuudai Pein (lol his last name means hero first name is pain ahahah lame guy ppff ) 
oi don't get me wrong no I love the last name you gave him,it's very fitting ;)
it just naturally his nickname is so stupid :XD: ...pein .. :D ahahha
Tomiko Kakuzu (SOOO CUTE sound like tomodachi (means friend I think) :aww:
seriously why akatsuki members doesnt have their last name anyways? 
girl, it was so nice to see this continue again :iconimblushingplz: 
finally we meet Konan,she is frigging gracefull as always ,also you made pein and konan's relationhip so in character
I love when AU fics are so in character ...just said awwww when he kissed her forehead it was a cute moment between them
as always you write very detailed emotions my favourite part about your writings <3
:thumbsup: for the city YEAHHH!!!!

and then I must say 
LOVE THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED THE CORPSEE

HYYAAA :iconipoopedplz: :iconipoopedplz:

 ...you morbid woman you are epic epic epic :evillaugh: I wish I could able to write like you...my writing sucks you know
:P